Sunday, February 19, 2012

Journal 2 - Series of Unfaithful Events

-          Sentence Summary: Alisha was running late for work, and all she could think about was the look Simon gave her as she ran out the house that morning.
-          Summary paragraph: Alisha ran out of her house the wind blowing in her hair, Simon yelled after her, but she paid him no mind. She knew she didn't deserve him, he was too good for her, she felt bad for being unfaithful to him, but it felt right. She continued walking, not paying attention to where she was, her head wrapped up in how she could get out of this situation and back into Simon’s arms. The cars were coming toward her in full speed, and a local business woman was riding in the car, paying more attention to her phone than to where she was going. Tears began streaking down her face, and the wind for the cars zooming past her was causing her to panic. For the first time, she looked at her surroundings but it was too late as the gray car sped toward her, with a distraught woman at the driver’s seat. All she could think of how Simon's face looked when she told him that she cheated on him with his brother Nathan.
-          Slow motion/ Flashback: Alisha heard a loud honking, and saw the desperation on the other woman’s face, before she felt a deep pressure on her hip. She heard a sickening snap as her head moved out of place, and the concrete was no longer under her feet. Her head and body flew with the wind as it slammed into the car. Her arm dislocated under her and she felt the bone pop out of place, something she saw a boy from her elementary years be able to do. Her body began to shift in position. Simon stood by the door looking in fear, petrified. The body flew his way making an unnatural and awkward twist. The crack of her spine echoing through the air. Her body flew throughout the air blood splattering on the sidewalk. Simon stood there as the sun blinded him watching as his first loves body flew throughout the air as a tear rolled down his cheek. Alisha's mutilated body stared to descend above his head. It was as if her body had turned into a rag doll. Alisha's body finally crashed into Simon's arm dead.

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